
He picked up his glass, his portable radio, and a bottle of Mercurochrome and stepped out onto the front porch. Outside the house, at least, it felt a few degrees cooler. Inside the house were sounds of games shows on the TV and of one of his four kids plunking out a piano lesson. Though he’d escaped the smell of cat, outside he was met by the smoky, pungent odor of mosquito spray spilling out from town trucks patrolling the neighborhood. He watched as the neighborhood kids followed a truck down his street, riding their bikes through its cloud of fumes. Crazy kids. They shouldn’t be breathing that stuff, he thought. But he guessed they weren’t hurting anybody. Besides, it was summer, and they needed to have their fun.
He plugged in his radio and began fiddling with the antennas and dial, trying to tune in the sound of Bob Prince’s voice. Through the static, he heard that the Pirates were at bat—two on, two out. The count on the batter was one and one. He hoped the static in the air and on his radio meant a storm in the area might just crack the stifling heat. He settled himself onto the porch swing, its metal chains creaking and groaning rhythmically as he rocked back and forth. He shook the bottle of Mercurochrome and began applying red liquid to the cuts on his hands. He’d gotten himself good that day, boning out cuts of meat he never could afford to buy for his own family.
The radio crackled. Swing and a miss. The porch swing groaned. The air sank. Ice cubes disappeared. He stared out into the evening, too hot and too tired to think. And then Bob Prince’s voice broke through the static, You can kiss that one goodbye! Willie had dinged one over the fence.
And for a brief, fleeting moment on a hot summer night, there was joy. And hope. And peace.
16 comments:
Nancy this is great. Those moments. So important. So beautiful.
Vivid writing here. What a blessing to read. Brought back memories of summer thunderstorms as a kid. Something about that static/crackle in the radio.
You got me again, girl. Move over, Garrison Keillor. Loved it. BTW, I used to run behing those mosquito trucks. When I told my kids about it, they were horrified :) I think they half expected me to glow in the dark or something...
I was one of those kids riding my bicycle behind the mosquito truck. I always begged for Mecurochrome instead of Methiolate for my cuts because we all know how Methiolate burns. You took me there.
you paint a vivid picture of days gone by...
Girl! I will always be your biggest fan! You are my Rock Star Writer.
I am not anonymous. I have unveiled. It's Providence.
This was GREAT. Makes me want to read more...
(My husband used to run behind the mosquito trucks, too.)
love love love... but what's new? i always do, especially here.
How achingly beautiful and how real...Thank you Nancy. - Ethel
What a vivid snapshot Nancy! Feels like a Norman Rockwell painting in words. And the joy of one hit over the fence--not too many things sweeter!
you know, you can really write. you really can. this is gorgeous, nancy. xo
Nancy.
This was so wonderful. Every perfect word.
I was telling someone today that most of my joy comes in fleeting moments. Maybe I'm not alone? :)
This is really good writing, Nancy. Such great detail -- you really paint the scene in words. You're a great storyteller, too! Nicely done.
What a fun read. How long has it been since I've heard, much less seen, the word Mercurochrome? I wonder if my children even know what it is? :)
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